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Thursday 23 August 2018

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Everyday when i get out from bed i am so tired but i think when anyone wakes up they are tired but i am tired for so long until the afternoon, that is when i stop being tired everyday. I always feel like sleeping but i still get up and get ready for school the thing that stops me from being so tired is so much food.

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1 comment:

  1. Kia ora William, this is so true. Every morning I wake up feeling tired too. I think it is normal for that to happen as it takes time for our bodies to wake up. Healthy food and exercise is very helpful for that.
    Watch out for that punctuation. Some of your sentences are too long and can be split up into more than one.
    Great work overall though!

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